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A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indend

  • 作者: 笨笨平
  • 来源: 未知
  • 发表于2016-08-22 17:31
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  • My favourite English proverb is “A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indend”.The proverd tells us that only the one who offers us a hand when we are in trouble is a real friend.
    My understanding of friendship all changrd in the sports meeting last year,when I was in the 800-meter race .Shortly after the beginning of the race ,I got a bad stomachache .I was so painful that I bent my body down .Many classmates ran by without even looking at me .Suddenly , Lin,a girl of the same grade stopped by me to go the school clinic .We soon became the closest friends.
    Through this experience ,I figure out the true meaning of friendship :A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indend .
    这篇短文以“A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indend”这个谚语来写作,先用浅显的语言解释了这个谚语的意思。然后讲述了发生在运动会上的意见亲身经历的事:在长跑比赛中,考生突发腹痛,很多同学为了比赛没有停下来,只有Lin放弃了比赛,送考生去了诊所。因此,两人成为了好朋友。最后一段重申主题。
    本文最为典型的夹叙夹议的文章。最大亮点在第二段个人经历的描述,徐事条理清晰,每句话都传达了必要的信息,上下文联系紧密。此外,故事情节合理,与主题相契合,体现了精巧的构思。